girlz r like bees
they'll hover around ur head
u'll feel gud
slowly they'll settle there
nd make a hive !!
u'll feel like the king of the world
jst put ur hands up
nd sweet honey @ ur disposal !!
no 1 will be happier than u !!
but then
sme day sme how
u'll realise tat
the hive has broken
nd the bees will
run after u
make ur life a hell
sting u again nd again
nd leave u groaning with pain !!
hey buddy..inspired by honey bees han...
ReplyDeleteachhca hai tum logo ko ek topic chaiye nd thn d work f gudda starts.. :)
tu to extremely talented nikala..........
ReplyDeletefor this creatvity........i can say...........you have very good eye........and...and...and...an....an....a...i cant say...yaar
bees and gals.... wow man super imagination!!!!
ReplyDeletewas more funny and romantic :D good going...
m nt gonna comment on whole da breed...but yeah true in most cases.....
ReplyDeletebut certainly a gud variety of poem.... kip it up buddy
"girlz r like bees
ReplyDeletethey'll hover around ur head
u'll feel gud
slowly they'll settle there
nd make a hive !!"
You won't believe it.I use the same kind of expressions(literally the words too)when i am asked to say something about it !!
nice one man! It feels as if i have written it..hehe.. gdone
this one was so good man
ReplyDeleteawesome work !!!
man it was too good yaar
ReplyDeletejst awesome
and the truth !!!
hey gudakesh..u've just expressed the hard fact of life in a funnier, witty way..
ReplyDeletebut, u know what, v guys make our lives miserables and repent later on..
anywayz v r ready for their stings' again..LOL