Thursday, January 15, 2009

the journey ..


Life is a mystic journey , with illusions aplenty
To live a simple one is what we crave
But like a twitched fork , it always behaves .
A linear sequence of scares awaits
To take them head on is what everyone hates .
But the bountiful of pleasures that lies ahead
Lures one and all to nullify the threats , whilst moving ahead .
At times we find ourselves in despair
With no one to speak to, no one to share .
In times like these , life seems to be a curse
Perhaps for the misdeeds of our previous birth .
To get respite from the turmoil that keeps unfolding
We either drone in pain , or keep on playing the blame game
Despite all this , we keep striving and making efforts
Our souls giving the backup , a gleam of hope doing the patch up !!
This is how life turns out to be
Springing surprises mostly during times of crisis .
To stay alive is all we need to do
Cause the basic fact remains the same , it ain’t anything new
" It’s the love for your life , that will always see you through "

9 comments:

  1. Good one man !!
    you seriously have a great talent!

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  2. Love Life & Life will love you.
    Hope is all around, the need is just to develop the vision.

    Good work dude.
    Nice lesson for all.

    Cheers!!

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  3. This poem is so superb... needless to say nething bout u n ur poems after reading this one
    Grt..

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  4. hey kake nice work yet again...
    wud take me a few more readings to completely understand it...due to the fact ki mera haath thoda tang hai poetry me...
    but still awesome work!
    kwwp it up!

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  5. good job dear!
    as gud as the last one!
    keep it up.

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  6. every new day is ur rebirth as a new person with a new approach..
    to make u realise that blaming a game droning in pain would factuate the illusions throwing u in despair........
    ur luv for life and in turn its love to u in the form of small but priceless moments has proved that u are safe in HIS hands n will be ever happy....
    u are always the best guda.take care

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  7. awesome gudda!!
    i am very fortunate 2 hav nine sparkling gems sharing with me some of their sparks......adding more blossoms 2 my life......thanks 4 everything....keep writing such masterpieces n make us even more proud!!

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  8. hmmm..........gud1....act best1..cos it matches da current situation...kip it up

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  9. hey pal...i knew...pisceans wer alwyz gr888 at poetry n othr forms of creativity...bt u r a complete storehouse of talent....!!!needless 2 talk of ur talent in da world of musiq too...!!

    gr8 wrk buddy....keep it up..!!

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