Life is but a hollow shaft
To render it fruitful one must know the craft
They say love ain't anything but a blank draft
But the truth is it gets colourful if you are blessed with the blissful art .
Who has the time , thou may say
But sit back and realise you may
Ur heart is still empty coz u r caught up in the daily grind
To redeem urself Love it is my dear frnd tat u need to find .
As for me , memories are all i have
Tats my fuel coz till the end i need to drive
May be tats where i'll find Her again .. She who's my life
My heart will surely again strive
to gain the love of which i hav alwayz been deprived . . .
P.S - listening to the hyms of Titanic is wat inspired me to pen down these words ... so there goes the "ode" !!
....ye kaise misleading thoughts hain ?..........
ReplyDelete....waise creation is awesome asusual :).......
nice n quite emotional work..!! :)
ReplyDeletehmmm..its gud.
ReplyDeleteThe 4th line wherein u relate Love to an Art is bothering me !
Art is a manipulating activity..whereas Love is totally opposite of it!
lemme me know what do u feel abt it !
anyhow its nice overall.
@ ankur ... bhai i percieve art as smethng wherein one needs to get engrossed completely ... jst as love is smethng tats meant to be felt with all the senses , so is art ... art isn't manipulative .. for one person it might mean a useless pastime but for sme1 else it may be the means to get lost in the realms of a different imaginary world ... so it is with Love .. tats y i used the simili ... neways thanx :)
ReplyDeletewell written..very meaningful
ReplyDeletehey....gr8 wrk yet again buddy...!!dis showz hw much tym u'v bin spendin dese dayz drownin urslf in da heart of d ocean....n by it i meant da "titanic"...
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